Yup.
The poem is clear and well read, but I'll suggest to read it with more feeling and also not by turns, more mix up.
Some nice work here. I agree with the above comment regarding mixing up your voices more, but I like they way you used choral speaking to emphasize the dramatic ending. Well done.
The poem is clear and well read, but I'll suggest to read it with more feeling and also not by turns, more mix up.
ReplyDeleteSome nice work here. I agree with the above comment regarding mixing up your voices more, but I like they way you used choral speaking to emphasize the dramatic ending. Well done.
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